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Anonymous · Posted: Sun December 10, 2006 Post subject: Some poetry of my own.

I don't often write poetry, I don't personally think I'm all that good at it. But I decided to break out some of my older stuff as well as a few new ones I've posted on other various sites.

Here goes... with some of the older stuff (it's kind of emo... xD) :

"Escape"

Just another cold day
On this sorry cold world
Where the people here wake
And their hate is unfurled

So you can't see the love
And you can't see the life
All you see is the malice, madness and strife

Where one person laughs
At the pain of another
The place is a hell
Where you can't trust your own brother

And the one you love
Doesn't feel the same
They tore you apart
And yet they feel no shame

I have to get free
And leave it all behind
I must escape from this place
I call it my mind

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The one you hate is the one rejected
The quiet one is who's neglected
One and the same; adversely affected
But the one you love is who you hate

Your heart you gave I must relinquish
The reason why, I can't destinguish
The love we have, must I extinguish?
That is my echoing debate.

There is no room for comprehension
There is no time for a convention
Time has run out now I can't mention
The reason you open my heart's gate

I couldn't make my own decision
You told me your feelings with such precision
Tears well up and cloud my vision
And my anger I can no longer sate

In my heart I was not letting
The one I loved, now I'm regretting
The scars I bear I won't be forgetting
As I accept my fate

"Don't"

Don't try and fix my problems
I don't think you can
Don't try and understand me
You don't know who I am
Don't try to make me love you
My heart has been done wrong
Don't try and make me faithful
My hope had been long gone

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Death slowly beckons
"Come meet your demise"
The angels I thought I knew
Were devils in disguise

Every time they led me
The path I chose was wrong
But inside something tells me
I knew it all along

"Reflection"

The moon shines bright
It mystifies
Reflecting the sadness in a pair of eyes

It sits there, lonely in the skies
Waiting until the time it dies

But in doing so, it wins
Relieves itself from all the sins
The moon goes down, the sun it dims
Tonight the new moon's life begins

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Missing Visions
Absent Thoughts
Lost Redemption
Battles Fought

Glass is Breaking
As is Silence
Hands are Shaking
Start the Violence

Content are the Simple
Displeased the Complex
Yet both are the Cursed
And Timeless their Vex

"Which Way Is Up?"

All my life has been in vain
To no end is my mental strain
Live my life with no true gain
I cannot bounce back

I search but all I find is pain
Hatred's driving me insane
Feelings I can no longer contain
So I snap and I attack

I feel like I am wasting time
Everything seems so sublime
This world, can I really call it mine?
I've fallen off the track

I feel like I am losing ground
Everything's turned upside down
I'm lost in life and can't be found
So could someone please tell me
Which way is up?

And then some newer stuff:

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A spirit bound
Broken, torn, jaded
Tied down to committment
Defeated, degraded

Darkness overcomes
A chasm in the light
Ripping and shredding
The eternal blight

Engulfed by hatred
Suffering, fear, pain
The storm has erupted
Will sorrow reign?

All virtues lost
The hope destroyed
The battle's lost
The hearts devoid

At the very peak
Scheduled surrender
The awakening
The Great Defender

"Forever and a Day"

I try to right the wrong,
"I love you" is what I say.
When you ask "How long?"
I state "Forever and a Day".

When the world is at your feet,
Can you cast it all aside?
When the day's a chore to greet,
Can your presence I deride?

Our love some can't accept,
But should they find their way-
They'll grasp at last the concept,
Of "Forever and a Day".

You don't know how hard you'll fall,
Until it's nearly lost.
But you'd gladly risk it all,
No matter what the cost.

You grab my arm at last,
Opposition to my dismay.
It breaks my heart's ice cast,
Your words: "Forever and a Day".

I couldn't love you more,
I've surrendered all my heart.
But if ever you let me through that door,
Our worlds will fall apart.

Hobo · Posted: Mon December 11, 2006 Post subject:

Those are very well done, although mostly depressing. If I was locked in a room and forced to write a good poem, I think I would be in the room forever.

Anonymous · Posted: Mon December 11, 2006 Post subject:

^^;; Heh, depressing is kind of my style... at least for poetry.

Thanks for your comment though, I never really liked learning about poetry in school, but now I'm sort of glad I did... I find that I want to write poems now instead of being forced to do so.

Anonymous · Posted: Tue December 12, 2006 Post subject:

I'm going to print up the last one and put it on my binder... >.>

Anonymous · Posted: Tue December 12, 2006 Post subject:

Yeah because you love her just that much.